Writing Essay Review: Please review my 1st essay draft. Make any needed changes that you see fit. Any changes made, please highlight or make bold so I may compare your corrected work to my original 1st draft. Please note: My punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence structure is somewhat poor. Attached is a copy of my first draft.,Regarding to my original question about reviewing my first comparison-contrast essay draft, Please see the attached .pdf. This .pdf contains the 2 articles that I wrote about in my comparison and contrast essay draft. Should you have any additional question please let me know.,Sorry the attachment did not go through the first time. Please see attached.,Thank you for the update.,Received, thank you. I will review your work and compare it to my own. After I finalize my 2nd draft, I will request that you read it over and let me know what you think.,Understood, thank you.